"My idea was only to make Nightmare Moon as a Filly; but after a good while I thought to include the Shadowbolts in this Drawing.
I don't know what their names are, so I gave them some. The first one on the right is Dark Blaze, the second one above them is Moon Shine and the last one on the left is Love Shadow."
Okay recruits you will be training in dark so that way you can attack the enemy without them seeing you. I've set this course for you young fillies it's the most challenging course but you seem to do fine on the course. Ready? BEGIN *blows whistle*
Ponies...they totally have hands XD also. "My idea was only to make Nightmare Moon as a Filly; but after a good while I thought to include the Shadowbolts in this Drawing. I don't know what their names are, so I gave them some. The first one on the right is Dark Blaze, the second one above them is Moon Shine and the last one on the left is Love Shadow."
Thought I'd give you a quick lesson in grammar. I may not be perfect; but I'm better than you as far as grammar goes.
i put the new one in that you have written. oke i not so good to speak or write this language. because this is not my standard language its my second/third language
also the sumbmit is a little bit easy
"My idea was only to make Nightmare Moon as a Filly; but after a good while I thought to include the Shadowbolts in this Drawing. I don't know what their names are, so I gave them some. The first one on the right is Dark Blaze, the second one above them is Moon Shine and the last one on the left is Love Shadow."
Thought I'd give you a quick lesson in grammar. I may not be perfect; but I'm better than you as far as grammar goes.
oke i not so good to speak or write this language.
because this is not my standard language its my second/third language